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Onyxian Commonwealth Bird of Prey

A thread was already made for this but since Joren posted it I can't edit it and he's gone so here is attempt #2 with fair bit of modifications

Onyxian Commonwealth Bird of Prey Mk. III

Vessel/Unit Identification: Onyxian Commonwealth (OC) Bird-of-Prey (Type 3)

Vessel/Unit Combat Designation: Fast attack vessel

Length : 350 Meters

Designer/Manufactuer: Sanctuary StarDrive

Crew Complement

28 Officers
100 Enlisted Crew

Weapons

- 3 Armek-M38 Heavy Pulse Turbolaser Cannons (1 Port Wingtip-mounted Emplacements, 1 Starboard Wingtip-mounted Emplacement, 1 Fore Nose-Mounted Emplacement)

- 8 Armek-M30 Retractable Turbolaser Cannons (3 Port Wing-mounted Emplacements, 3 Starboard Wing-mounted Emplacements, 1 Fore Nose-Mounted Emplacements, 1 Rear-mounted Emplacement)

- 10 Cren Munitions Destroyer-class General Projectile Launchers (7 Fore Nose-Mounted Emplacement, 3 Aft-Mounted Emplacement)

- 10 Kuat Drive Yards Retractable Heavy Proton Torpedo Launchers (7 Fore Nose-Mounted Emplacement, 3 Aft-Mounted Emplacement)

- 10 Borstel NK-7 Retractable Ion Cannons (3 Port Wing-mounted Emplacements, 3 Starboard Wing-mounted Emplacements, 3 Fore Nose-Mounted Emplacements, 1 Rear-mounted Emplacement)

- 1 Phylon Q7 Retractable Tractor Beam Projector (Fore Nose-Mounted
Emplacement)

- 4 Particle Projectors (2 Port Wing-mounted Emplacements, 2 Starboard Wing-mounted Emplacements)

Anti-fighter Gattling Blisters are located along the ventral and dorsal portions of the wings - four total.



Propulsion Systems

- 3 Sanctuary StarDrive mk.II Emissionless Ion Engines (Main Engines)
- 2 Sanctuary StarDrivemk I Ion Engines (For emergency use)

1 (Main) SSD HEN2 Hyperdrive Engine (Class 1)
1 (Backup) SSD HEN1 Hyperdrive Engine (Class 9)

Sublight Speed: 55 MGLT(Standard)
Atmospheric Speed: 1500 KPH

Internal Vessel/Unit Complement

- 1 T4a Lambada-class Shuttle
- 10 CAV (Combat Assault Vehicle)

External Vessel/Unit Complement

- 12 E-78 Droid Fighters

Hull Composition

Titanium Reinforced Alusteel Hull. The heavily shielded, carbonite and durasteel-reinforced dome holds and protects the main reactor. And both the Armek-M38 Heavy Pulse Turbolaser Cannons are protected by 1 Metre of Quadanium Steel Hull Plating each.

Reflective Hull Armor Plating –

Almost like a mirror, the reflective hull armor plating is designed to reflect the starscape while providing added protection against enemy weapons fire. It is a type of molecularly bonded armor that is strengthened at the subatomic level, and coated with blaster-laser resistant coating. Even after shield loss, the armor was designed for extra defense.

Hull: 1000 RU



Shield Systems -

- 2 Hoerch/Kessel Drive Yards Type One Particle/Energy Shield generators
- 1 Sovereignty Shipworks SGT-6 Shield Generators (Used as reserve only)

Shields: 1100 SBD(Standard)


Anti-Intruder System

The Bird of Prey interior design has been radically improved and upgraded. Checkpoints every twenty-five meters throughout the ship has been implemented, with blast doors at each checkpoint. Also at every checkpoint are force locks (strong force fields) that will automatically engage to block a person who does not have the proper clearance to that portion of the ship. At every checkpoint (which are manned by a security droid) are clearance checks – which are done by voice recognition, or ID cards. Access to the bridge is extremely limited, and only the on-duty officers and crewmen are allowed entry. Persons wishing to enter the bridge must undergo a molecular scan and a retinal scan – those who do not have clearance are barred from entry by force locks and blast doors. Admittance to the bridge is only permitted if somebody on the inside of the bridge allows it. Also lining the checkpoints are the mark four guardian grids. These grids are outfitted with laser cannons that track known hostiles and eliminate them. The grids only come online when someone tries to gain access through the checkpoint without clearance.

The anti-intruder system is also designed to penetrate fingerprints to locate forgeries and fakes. The fingerprint scanners have been upgraded to spot fake fingerprints – such as the known fingerprint copying device. The scanner also checks for life signs with in the person. It will not accept clearance from anyone without a pulse of some kind.

Never shall another Bird of Prey be captured.


Particle Projectors


The Particle Projectors (or PPs) use magnetic rollers to launch balls of superheated matter at incredible speed. The balls are small, so many may be stored in a single ship, and once they overcome the magnetic force holding them together by either the passage of time or a collision with an enemy ship, they tear themselves apart with incredible ferocity, likely shredding the delicate innards of a struck vessel.

The downside to these guns are their short range. Although they have incredible stopping power, and proved in tests to be quite capable of tearing through an enemy fighter, it is not long after firing that the force of the matter pushing away from each other overcomes the magnetic forces propelling them along. It is this principle that makes the shots so deadly even after they've smashed into an enemy ship, but also gives them a relatively short combat range.

Armek-M38 Heavy Pulse Turbolaser Cannons -

These weapons are designed to be the primary weapons onboard the Bird of Prey and are fixed at each wingtip and under the nose. Each weapon fires a bolt with the same power as a Heavy Turbolaser Cannon except the cannon fires three bolts in a quick burst followed by a power down period double the normal power down period for a Heavy Turbolaser Cannon. These weapons can deliver a devestating blow and provide the Bird of Prey with a knockout punch.

Retractable Weapons Cannons –

All weapons (except the pulse turbolasers) onboard the Bird of Prey have been upgraded and are now retractable. The weapon extends a meter or so (depending on the weapon) out of the ship, fires, retracts, recharges, and fires again. New easy-slide rails compensate for the obvious reduction in time to fire twice. When compared to weapons already mounted on the hulls, the retractable weapons were found to be just as easy to recharge and fire as the standard weapons.


Cren Munitions Destroyer-class General Projectile Launcher
<a href=http://therebelfaction.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7174>Description</a>


Sovereignty Shipworks mk.II Emission less Ion Engines –

Along with the other upgrades, the Bird of Prey mark two has thrown out the long obsolete KDY Destroyer-1 Ion Engines and replaced it with a new state-of-the-art engine system developed by Sovereignty Shipworks. Exhaust from the ship is carried by tubes mounted inside the hull to vents all over the ship. The exhaust is vented methodically, and is dispersed with enough force for the ion exhaust to spread over a wide area – mingling with space particles and then dissolving. This allows the Bird to move without a trace. To compensate for any circumstance, the vents that release the exhaust gasses can be closed. In this event, the gasses can be stored, where it is processed for later venting.


Auxiliary Bridge


“War breeds necessity.”

This could not be more truthful. In recent events it has been observed that the need for a second bridge has become apparent. The auxiliary bridge is smaller then the main bridge, but it has all the necessary components that it’s larger companion carries. The bridge is activated in two ways –

One, in the event of total systems failure on the main bridge, the second bridge can be activated.
Two, if the first bridge is destroyed somehow, the second one comes online.

The same security measures applied to the main bridge also are implemented on the auxiliary bridge – with blast doors, fingerprint scanners, and force locks. In the event of the bridge crew being killed, trained crewmembers have been instructed in how to operate the ship.


Emanon Computing Advanced Targeting Computer

This is one of the most advanced targeting computer systems used in the Galactic Coalition. It has different varieties, so that each type of weapon (anti-starfighter, missile, anti-capital ship) has its own specialized targeting computers. These are capable of locating the weakest spot in an enemy’s shields, and then do pinpoint attacks on it. As well, the gunner can select a target, say a certain spot on the hull, or a weapons emplacement, and the weapon will immediately fire directly on it. This allows for extremely accurate and effective missile volleys and heavy beam weapon volleys.

Furthermore the gunner is capable of using visual sensors to select a spot on the ship to target. This allows the weapons to target enemy ships, even if targeting computers are being jammed. Also the computer has a direct hook-up with the Graviton Detector mk. I onboard the vessel and is capable of receiving information directly from that, allowing the co-ordinates where a ship is located to be put in the computer. The gunners can manually insert co-ordinates to be targeted in the computer if needed, though this would probably be a final resort tactic.

Each weapon has its own Emanon Computing Advanced Targeting Computer, however they can easily be tied together in groups. For extra efficiency and power these targeting computers can be grouped together, so that multiple guns are going for the exact same spot on a ship. This would overload an enemy ship’s shields, allowing a large amount of energy to go on and strike the hull. If the shots are correctly aimed that it would even be possible to destroy the enemy’s main weapons.


Security Force


Trained to provide maximum security onboard the Bird of Prey. These are specially modified assassin droids who have been programmed with anti-Force user techniques. They are directly tied in with the Bird of Prey main computer and are instantly alerted to any intruders. They are programmed to seek out and destroy known intruders. They take no prisoners and do not respond to negotiation. They have one objective: protect the Bird of Prey at all costs.


Pulse Shielding


Pulse Shielding is a new, innovative technology. Instead of the conventional energy shield, it launches brief but rapid blasts of a pure, energy-rich magnetic force. The force is a nigh-perfect reflector of energy and redirects almost all solid masses that would be hurled at it (in the form of missiles, bullets, rocks, ape droppings, etc). However, to do this, pulse shielding requires massive amounts of power, and the batteries for it cannot keep going for more then three seconds at once, although there is enough energy in total to last about a minute if breaks are given inbetween uses. This allows the ship to protect itself at the last minute from an otherwise fatal shot.



Advanced Power Grid System –

The upgraded version of the Bird of Prey absorbs more power than its predecessor. And to increase efficiency and tighten security measures, a new power generator has been installed. Unlike normal generators, which are located at a single point, the new generator has been designed much like a human nervous system. It is made up of individual powerpacks that are located throughout the ship. The system ties into all ship systems, giving them power. This is a much more efficient design then the normal power core. This way the power core is the entire ship. Each powerpack is also designed to operate at full capacity if another pack is damaged or destroyed. This eliminates the option of sabotage of the Bird’s nervous system.

Advanced Power Distribution System -

Because of the Bird of Prey's need to be a flexible ship it has the capability to reroute power from various systems to other systems as is necessary in combat. For example power could be rerouted from the weapons systems to help increase the shield power or the speed of the Bird of Prey. Virtually every system on the Bird of Prey is capable of using more power than it is normally allocated.


New technologies incorporated into new design -

<a href=http://pub33.ezboard.com/fswalliancefrm24.showMessage?topicID=251.topic>Graviton Detector mk I</a>

<a href=http://pub33.ezboard.com/fswalliancefrm24.showMessage?topicID=172.topic>Scorpion Attack Droid (Complement: 50)</a>

<a href=http://pub33.ezboard.com/fswalliancefrm43.showMessage?topicID=4.topic>Elite Anti-Missile Defense System</a>

Diversity Composite Hull -

Due to the many races that make up the Galactic Coalition (and the New Republic of years past), the Research and Development Department investigated the various technological endeavors of the many cultures only to discover that a certain derivative of a plant sap (now classified) absorbs the energy from an ion weapon. The effect of adding this derivative between alloys (hull and blisters) allows for not only protecting a vessel from ion weaponry but renders boarding craft or other boarding means via contact inoperable as the ions are discharged at the area of each breach (sectional). The code name for this derivative is the Diversity Composite and is classified.


ATS: Anti-Targeting System

The Anti-targeting system is designed to cast a field 100 km out to disrupt any signals being sent to gather computerized target locks. Typically, targeting computers derive their object targets based on data gathered in concert with standard ship's sensor package or independent signal casting device. The field of ATS disrupts those incoming signals by offsetting/reflecting the data back to it's origin. The result being wrong targeting data being received (the farther away the more off track) which would result is less positive (or less critical) strikes.

General Backgrounder:

The Bird of Prey is designed to be the primary fast-attack ship in the Onyxian Commonwealth military and with time it will become the most common ship in the military just as it's predecessor did in the Sovereignty military. It's primary weapons are it's speed and maneouverability and it's powerful punch. The Bird of Prey is designed to make strafing runs and quick attack missions against slower, larger targets. It will be used in groups and it provides an incredible punch that can be effective against even some of the most heavily armoured targets.

The Bird of Prey's primary weapons are it's Pulse Turbolasers though they are backed up by an impressive complement of other weapons that are also able to deal out large quantities of damage. The E-78 fighters would be primarily used as a reconaissance force and wouldn't be capable of taking on even a squadron of standard space superiority fighters.

The Bird of Prey has a bright future ahead of it at the forefront of the Commonwealth's military and this version of it should serve for a number of years without needing replacement or upgrade.

Comments

#17 9:12pm 04/04/06

actually, I have not fought a ship thats ever used the system... they may have had them, but not been used... Either way, Ive debated with Dolash in many IM's over the asshattery of said system, this is my first time actually posting it.

#16 11:24pm 02/04/06

I don't think Dolash uses it for a couple posts. My impression is he uses it for a few seconds. But it covers the whole ship, not just parts. And yes its the same system Marth.

Heir: This has been used on numerous R&Ds. You have fought against R&Ds that use this system. TNO has fought against R&Ds using this system. This isn't some new technology Marth just made up for the craft, this is by now tried and tested technology. It was brand new during the creation of the Second Wave ships way back in the summer (I think that's when the Second Wave class was originally made). It might have been pre-summer, I'm not sure. And the system was designed to hold the strain put on it. And its only used for short times to prevent too much of a strain being on it. The thing doesn't wear out, we don't use the shield for long enough to allow any wear to happen.

#15 10:46pm 02/04/06

This may not be the same thing as what dolash uses I'm not sure. This is my interpretation of the way this was intended to be used. I may be wrong.

#14 9:58pm 02/04/06

Really? Because the way Dolash uses it it basically wards off all incoming damage for a post or two.

#13 9:47pm 02/04/06

It would take time between uses. Say one post etc. And it wouldn't work over the whole ship only one portion. So if a BOP got caught in a crossfire then well it would be screwed.

#12 11:02pm 01/04/06

and Im saying it would wear out after one to two uses at such strenous time tables...

#11 7:27pm 01/04/06

A stated it can only be used three seconds at once and for a total of 60 seconds at maximum in a battle. And that would be a long battle. As for the reflective hull plating im not exactly sure what you're saying. Of course maybe I'll understand later because I just finished getting my wisdom teeth out and the anasthetic is still on.

#10 6:04am 01/04/06

I wouldn't imagine that Joren carries complete specs of his craft in his back pocket. But then, I didn't read the RP, so I'm just talking out of my buttox here.

#9 1:10am 01/04/06

I have a problem with [b]Pulse Shielding[/b]

[QUOTE]Pulse Shielding is a new, innovative technology. Instead of the conventional energy shield, it launches brief but rapid blasts of a pure, energy-rich magnetic force. The force is a nigh-perfect reflector of energy and redirects almost all solid masses that would be hurled at it (in the form of missiles, bullets, rocks, ape droppings, etc). However, to do this, pulse shielding requires massive amounts of power, and the batteries for it cannot keep going for more then three seconds at once, although there is enough energy in total to last about a minute if breaks are given inbetween uses. This allows the ship to protect itself at the last minute from an otherwise fatal shot.[/QUOTE]

Such a system would require the use of the entire hull to project such an all encompasing force, a system that would sure to deny it its own reflective hull plating. As well, I would say such a forced use would wear any given system down extremely fast. Say only a couple uses in a battle...

#8 9:20pm 31/03/06

<a href=http://www.therebelfaction.com/forums/showthread.php?p=119377#post119377>voila</a>

#7 2:43am 16/02/06

It's also longer. Basically the ship is redone but keeps the same name, general shape, and mission profile.

#6 2:13am 16/02/06

I think the name difference is that the new version has a whole bunch of new systems and stuff on it that the old one never did.

#5 2:09am 16/02/06

I can't imagine there is much of a difference.

But thats sounds reasonable.

#4 1:23am 16/02/06

I'll call it what I want, damnit!

#3 1:20am 16/02/06

A) It wasn't an annexation. It was a merge.

B)Yes the Union has the <b>old</b> version of the BOP. This is a new version. I completely support the Union's possession of the Bird of Prey mk. II. However, we're on to the Bird of Prey mk. III, which is what this is.

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