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DMC R&D(already reapproved)

Just posting this so people can find it easier, since The Farquak Empire has permission to build them, and they were reapproved by Kanbal, and I couldn't find the threads they were originally posted in.

Missile Cruiser
Designer: Damorian Manufacturing Corporation
Length:500m
Speed:10 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup hyperdrive: x2
Shields:1700 SBD
Hull:1000 RUs
Weapons:70 proton torpedoe launchers-10 refills each, 10 cluster bombs
Onboard craft:12 fighters
Special Devices:Cloaking shield

The Missile Cruiser was designed by Scottie Gill. It very costly sensors and targetting data can see the faults where two shields collide. Another good thing about it compaired to other missile ships, like the Torpedoe SPhere is it can target any ship and can fire all of it's torpedoes at any sized ship over 100 meters. In the case of a ship under 100 meters, only twenty of the sensors are good enough to target ships that size. The cloaking shields are good, because if an enemy comes into the systme, they won't know about the cruisers. Each cruiser has a specilize communications device, that travels very slow across logn distances, but can go throught the cloaking shield. While faster then a Star Destroyer it isn't the fastest ship in existance.

Cloaking Shield:
Your Standard cloaking shield except that it has been modified so that the special communications system can get through the shield, on one channel. The ship also has other normal communication system.


Defender Heavy Cruiser
Length: 2000m
Crew: 16 000
Troops: 4 270
Weapons: 4 Repulser Beaming Technology's Emplacements, 50 Proton Torpedo Launchers, ten refills each, 20 Double Ion Cannons, 20 Double Turbolasers and Ten Tractor Beams
Onboard Craft: 96 Fighters, 15 Deliverence Shuttles and 5 Sentenial Shuttles
Onboard Ground Vehicles: 50 X-1 Vipers, 30 AT-AT and 25 Speeder Bikes
Hull: 3200 RUs
Main Shields: 4500 SBD
Backup Shields: 2700 SBD
Sublight Speed: 3 MGLT
Backup Sublight Speed: 1 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup Hyperdrive: x3
Specialized Systems: Cloaking Shield and Specialized Communication System

Description:
The Defender Heavy Cruiser was designed by Balmorran Arms Corporation in conjunction with Damorian Manufacturing Corporation. The sublight speed is very slow, but that is because the ship would have to be a lot bigger to supply power to the shields, weapons and a faster sublight engine. The hyperdrive is up to the standard of the Corporation. It uses the same cloaking shield found on the Missile Cruiser, a recent invention by Damorian Manufacturing Corporation. The specialized communications system is the same as on the Missile Cruiser. The ship has a large amount of proton torpedo launchers, as did the Missile Cruiser. The Defender Heavy Cruiser on the other hand has 20 Double Ion Cannons and 20 Double Turbolasers, while the Missile Cruiser had no beam weapons. The Defender Heavy Cruiser also has 4 Repulser Beaming Technology’s Emplacements. One of the emplacements, when fired, can destroy a 500 meter ship that doesn’t have any shielding in one shot. They also can be used as tractor beams and if you are on a collision course with someone can bounce you away from them. They unfortunately do no good against shielding, so they are generally not powered up until after the battle is well on its way. It is usually used in conjunction with four Missile Cruisers, four Freedom Cruisers and eight Lightning Assault Cruisers, to form one complete defense unit.

Freedom Cruiser
Length: 500m
Width: 400m
Crew: 2 500
Troops: 600
Weapons: 40 Double Heavy Turbolasers, 12 Proton Torpedo Launchers, ten refills each, 10 Ion Cannons and 1 Tractor Beam
Onboard Craft: 12 Fighters, 3 Deliverence Shuttles
Onboard Ground Vehicles: 12 AT-ATs
Hull: 1000 RU
Main Shields: 1750 SBD
Backup Shields: 1250 SBD
Sublight Speed: 8 MGLT
Backup Sublight Speed: 6 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup Hyperdrive: x2
Specialize Systems: Cloaking Shield, Specialized Communications System

Description:
The Freedom Cruiser was designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporation around the time the Defender Heavy Cruiser was designed. It has more weapons then the Missile Cruiser, but a lot less torpedo launchers. It was originally designed to defend convoys, but our researchers developed the Lightning Cruiser, which is a lot faster. It was to slow to be used to defend convoys, so it was moved to the planetary defense category. With it’s cloaking shield it can stay at the edge of the system, just waiting for enemy ships to jump in to ambush. The cloaking shield and specialized communications device are the same as on the Missile Cruiser and Defender Heavy Cruiser

Lightning Cruiser
Length: 250m
Crew: 500
Troops: 200
Weapons: 20 Double Turbolasers, 5 Proton Torpedo Launchers and one tractor beam
Onboard Craft: 1 Deliverence Shuttle
Onboard Ground Vehicles: 4 AT-ATs
Hull: 500 RU
Main Shield: 850 SBD
Backup Shield: 750 SBD
Sublight Speed: 20 MGLT
Backup Sublight Speed: 15 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup Hyperdrive: x2
Specialized Systems: Specialized Communications System

Description:
The Lightning Cruiser was designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporations a vessel to protect convoys from pirates and enemy ships trying to disrupt the shipping. It is shorter then the other ships designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporation and has a lot fewer torpedo launchers then the Missile Cruiser and Defender Cruiser. The specialized communications system is the same as on the Missile Cruiser.

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#13 6:01am 24/03/03

Please divide these R&Ds into seperate pages in reference to Kas' new rules. Then i'll look at them again.

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#12 6:35pm 23/03/03

Note, Missile Cruiser is the second R&D I want the staff to look at, it only needs one more approval. I am extending the description now.

Missile Cruiser
Designer: Damorian Manufacturing Corporation
Length:500m
Speed:10 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup hyperdrive: x2
Shields:1700 SBD
Hull:1000 RUs
Weapons: 60 General Purpose Launchers-10 refills each, 6 cluster bombs
Onboard craft:12 fighters
Special Devices: none

The Missile Cruiser was designed by Scottie Gill. It very costly sensors and targetting data can see the faults where two shields collide. Another good thing about it compaired to other missile ships, like the Torpedoe SPhere is it can target any ship and can fire all of it's torpedoes at any sized ship over 100 meters. In the case of a ship under 100 meters, only twenty of the sensors are good enough to target ships that size. While faster then a Star Destroyer it isn't the fastest ship in existance. The Missile Cruiser was once sold to Winger Mining Corporation, who built several, and used them in the defence of Garos IV. Though the battle was lost, they managed to send three Missile Cruisers out with Jesmin Ragabag, in payment for her helping them. While fleeing from the Shadow Guard, Jesmin took them and her fleet to Lwhekk. They were ambushed, and all the Missile Cruisers were destroyed. Jesmin managed to escape with the information on their stats intact in her flagship, though she was captured after making a blind jump to Farquak. Her ship was destroyed, though the Cren managed to retreive the data on all the ships in the galaxy(not R&Ded) and one R&Ded ones(Missile Cruiser). They started building them, and two are complete so far. They are expected to serve very well against the Jed when the Farquak Empire goes out to retreive their lost homeworld of Crennial.

Hope that is a bit longer Lup.

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#11 10:32pm 10/03/03

Thank's for the approval Seth, and Lup, I'll try to expand on them and get back with the expanded versions tonight or tomorrow.

#10 10:18pm 07/03/03

lol, I think you caught him on a bad day...


I really don't have a problem with it, the description is short , but since you've revised it several times already...


APPROVED

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#9 5:11pm 05/03/03

Ok, i'm not approving anymore shitty little 100 word R&Ds. Expand them, make them more than just numbers ships, and then i'll start taking them seriously and actually want to look over them.

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#8 3:45am 27/02/03

Give us time. We have lives outside here that means we can't always get things done as fast as you'd like.

I'll give them another quick onceover when i next get the chance.

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#7 11:39pm 25/02/03

Bump, and do you guys still want to revise this, or are we going to let them be as they were?

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#6 11:48pm 18/02/03

Missile Cruiser
Designer: Damorian Manufacturing Corporation
Length:500m
Speed:10 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup hyperdrive: x2
Shields:1700 SBD
Hull:1000 RUs
Weapons: 60 General Purpose Launchers-10 refills each, 6 cluster bombs
Onboard craft:12 fighters
Special Devices: none

The Missile Cruiser was designed by Scottie Gill. It very costly sensors and targetting data can see the faults where two shields collide. Another good thing about it compaired to other missile ships, like the Torpedoe SPhere is it can target any ship and can fire all of it's torpedoes at any sized ship over 100 meters. In the case of a ship under 100 meters, only twenty of the sensors are good enough to target ships that size. While faster then a Star Destroyer it isn't the fastest ship in existance.

Took off 10 launchers, 4 cluster bombs. Got rid of cloaking shield/special communications device.


Defender Heavy Cruiser
Not used anymore

Freedom Cruiser
Length: 600m
Width: 400m
Crew: 2 500
Troops: 600
Weapons: 40 Heavy Turbolasers, 12 Proton Torpedo Launchers, ten refills each, 10 Ion Cannons and 1 Tractor Beam
Onboard Craft: 24 Fighters, 3 Deliverence Shuttles
Onboard Ground Vehicles: 12 AT-ATs
Hull: 1000 RU
Main Shields: 1750 SBD
Backup Shields: 1250 SBD
Sublight Speed: 8 MGLT
Backup Sublight Speed: 6 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup Hyperdrive: x2
Specialize Systems: none

Description:
The Freedom Cruiser was designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporation around the time the Defender Heavy Cruiser was designed. It has more weapons then the Missile Cruiser, but a lot less torpedo launchers. It was originally designed to defend convoys, but our researchers developed the Lightning Cruiser, which is a lot faster. It was to slow to be used to defend convoys, so it was moved to the planetary defense category.

Took off the double on the heavy turbolasers, hopefully that is fine, instead of reducing. Added 12 fighters. Please not, Hapan Battle dragon has like 40 turbolasers, 40 ion cannons, 3 triple ion cannons, 36 fighters. Plus some proton torps and some pulse mass mine launchers. Got rid of cloaking shields/special communications device.

Lightning Cruiser
Length: 300m
Crew: 500
Troops: 200
Weapons: 20 Turbolasers, 5 Proton Torpedo Launchers and one tractor beam
Onboard Craft: 1 Deliverence Shuttle, 5 fighters
Onboard Ground Vehicles: 4 AT-ATs
Hull: 500 RU
Main Shield: 850 SBD
Backup Shield: 750 SBD
Sublight Speed: 20 MGLT
Backup Sublight Speed: 15 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup Hyperdrive: x2
Specialized Systems: none

Description:
The Lightning Cruiser was designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporations a vessel to protect convoys from pirates and enemy ships trying to disrupt the shipping. It is shorter then the other ships designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporation and has a lot fewer torpedo launchers then the Missile Cruiser.

Took off the double on the turbolasers, added 50m on to it, added five fighters. Got rid of special communications device.


Changes this time:
The hyperdrive stuff was already there, but np. The length has been increased to 600m for the Freedom Cruiser.

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#5 11:30pm 18/02/03

He stated that the hyperdrive speed was x1 for norma, x2 for backups. Millenium Falcon was .5x, so main hyperdrove is twice as slow, and for the backups, four times as slow.

#4 7:01pm 18/02/03

[b]Missile Cruiser[/b]

- speed Class for hyperdrive.

Thats pretty much the only issue I have with it, and as long as its within the realm of normality , i don't see any reason why it will not be approved.


[b]Freedom Cruiser[/b]

- Speed Class for hyperdrive.
- Increase Length - for its weapons, troops , crew, and support craft / ground force capacity , I would suggest closer to about 600m. (IMO)
- sublight speed , I'm unsure about this, a second opinion needed from either Lei or Dak on that I think.



[b]Lightning Cruiser[/b]

- Hyperdrive Class rating.

Apart from that, I have np with it.

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#3 4:03am 14/02/03

Missile Cruiser
Designer: Damorian Manufacturing Corporation
Length:500m
Speed:10 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup hyperdrive: x2
Shields:1700 SBD
Hull:1000 RUs
Weapons: 60 General Purpose Launchers-10 refills each, 6 cluster bombs
Onboard craft:12 fighters
Special Devices: none

The Missile Cruiser was designed by Scottie Gill. It very costly sensors and targetting data can see the faults where two shields collide. Another good thing about it compaired to other missile ships, like the Torpedoe SPhere is it can target any ship and can fire all of it's torpedoes at any sized ship over 100 meters. In the case of a ship under 100 meters, only twenty of the sensors are good enough to target ships that size. While faster then a Star Destroyer it isn't the fastest ship in existance.

Took off 10 launchers, 4 cluster bombs. Got rid of cloaking shield/special communications device.


Defender Heavy Cruiser
Not used anymore

Freedom Cruiser
Length: 500m
Width: 400m
Crew: 2 500
Troops: 600
Weapons: 40 Heavy Turbolasers, 12 Proton Torpedo Launchers, ten refills each, 10 Ion Cannons and 1 Tractor Beam
Onboard Craft: 24 Fighters, 3 Deliverence Shuttles
Onboard Ground Vehicles: 12 AT-ATs
Hull: 1000 RU
Main Shields: 1750 SBD
Backup Shields: 1250 SBD
Sublight Speed: 8 MGLT
Backup Sublight Speed: 6 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup Hyperdrive: x2
Specialize Systems: none

Description:
The Freedom Cruiser was designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporation around the time the Defender Heavy Cruiser was designed. It has more weapons then the Missile Cruiser, but a lot less torpedo launchers. It was originally designed to defend convoys, but our researchers developed the Lightning Cruiser, which is a lot faster. It was to slow to be used to defend convoys, so it was moved to the planetary defense category.

Took off the double on the heavy turbolasers, hopefully that is fine, instead of reducing. Added 12 fighters. Please not, Hapan Battle dragon has like 40 turbolasers, 40 ion cannons, 3 triple ion cannons, 36 fighters. Plus some proton torps and some pulse mass mine launchers. Got rid of cloaking shields/special communications device.

Lightning Cruiser
Length: 300m
Crew: 500
Troops: 200
Weapons: 20 Turbolasers, 5 Proton Torpedo Launchers and one tractor beam
Onboard Craft: 1 Deliverence Shuttle, 5 fighters
Onboard Ground Vehicles: 4 AT-ATs
Hull: 500 RU
Main Shield: 850 SBD
Backup Shield: 750 SBD
Sublight Speed: 20 MGLT
Backup Sublight Speed: 15 MGLT
Hyperdrive: x1
Backup Hyperdrive: x2
Specialized Systems: none

Description:
The Lightning Cruiser was designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporations a vessel to protect convoys from pirates and enemy ships trying to disrupt the shipping. It is shorter then the other ships designed by Damorian Manufacturing Corporation and has a lot fewer torpedo launchers then the Missile Cruiser.

Took off the double on the turbolasers, added 50m on to it, added five fighters. Got rid of special communications device.

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#2 3:16am 13/02/03

I'll try to get back to you, but please note, these were already re-approved. Also, when WMC died, we gave stuff to Jesmin(in payment for helping us), Shadow Guard (cause we had surrendered to you) and AGM(for trying to help us). The R&Ds that DMC gave us, were part of the stuff given to Jesmin. I can't give explinations, now, but I will get them to you. Oh, and scrap the Defender Cruiser, I have decided I won't be building one anyway, and the repulsor beams sort of go against the no special superweapons.

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#1 2:06am 12/02/03

Technically when WMC was destroyed, all its assets were lost, not put into stasis so that you could come back later with some warped new version of the group.

I have some major problems with your craft.

[b]Missile Cruiser[/b]

-Too many torps for a 500m ship

-Explain how the cloaking system works, and how it was able to be modified to escape the double blind falacy.

[b]Defender Cruiser[/b]

-Change the name, its too close to the Defender SD or TIE, try and be original.

-Explain how those Repulsor beams work. It smells like a superlaser style ship to me, so i'm not going to let it slide without you explaining its every nuance to me.

-Again explain that cloaking device.

[b]Freedom Cruiser[/b]

-Again on the cloaking.

-Reduce number of Double Turbolasers

[b]Lightning Cruiser[/b]

-Make them normal turbolasers only.

-Explain the special communications system.