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TTR-ORS R&D

Device Name: Corruptor Cloaking Device
Designer: TTR Industrial/ Sovereignty Shipworks Ltd.

Through the application of common ores and some not so common ores, the formation of a newer alloy was formed. When this ally was placed in contact with crystals grown in the caves on Tholatin a strange reaction occurred. According to the government, the mountain in which the caves were located seemed to disappear. While at the time this seemed odd, a scientist from ORS found out that it was a natural cloaking device. Since then, teams have been at work establishing a device to be used.

Workers on Tholatin began to mine the ore and send it off to ORS for use in development. The technicians came up with a solution involving the coating of a ship with this material, and the application of a beam sending light from the crystal through tubes to hit the hull and pass through to the newly developed alloy. A small shuttle was equipped with a harmless laser in the cargo hold while being coated with this new material. Inside the device, the crystal was held in place by fiber-like wires that absorbed energy from the laser hitting the crystal.

These fiber-like wires, when the laser was turned on, absorbed the energy produced by the laser coming in contact with the crystal and sent it along the wires. These wires branched off into the hull the hit the metal. The ship essentially disappeared from every scope that ORS had on it. Nothing picked it up. The shuttle could have swept in the hangar of a capital ship before it was seen. This of course was only a prototype and unpractical for construction. It would take something a lot better to make it worthwhile.

It came around to one thing. A smaller laser was incased inside a durasteel tube that held the laser connected to fiber optic wires. This concoction was attached to the lower hull where it was the thickest, during the construction of the ship. Wires were then inlayed into the hull, which, instead of being lined with the alloy, was actually built of the alloy. When activated, the results were a bit less than with the test on the shuttle, but equally as effective. The scanners were not able to track the ship, and the ship was able to track the fleet. There was no double blind effect presented.

Although the material this was made out of was not easy to make, it was easy to purchase the materials required. The metals would then have to be heated at gargantuan degrees before mixing properly to form the alloy. Only kilns that were hidden on an ORS planet could do it. Not only was it hard to make the device and it’s components, the ship it was installed on had to meet requirements.

Requirements:
1)* * * * The ship cannot be over 1000 meters in length. Early tests done on ships over a thousand meters in length, expensive as it was, proved not too be effective. The cloak was unable to accurately cover the ship in an impregnable cloak and the ship was left exposed. The cloaking device was a waste of space.
2)* * * * The ship had to be able to handle the stress of a cloaking device. The device requires a lot of power and sometimes it is best to build in a generator only for powering the cloak.
3)* * * * The new material requires small amounts of hibridium along with 2 parts crystasteel and one part durasteel. The resulting compound is very strong and when hit with energy from the crystals makes a sensor exempt bubble.
4)* * * * Requires specially mined crystals from the planet Tholatin and there isn’t an endless supply. The crystals should be used wisely and not wasted on unnecessary vessels. Possible in the future the crystal could be transplanted.

R&D Requirements:
1)* * * * 20 days to R&D
2)* * * * Adds two days to build time for ships using the technology (One day for actual cloak, one extra day for new hull material)
3) Can only be detected by Sonar, CGT’s, and the eye when close enough

Comments

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#8 2:26am 25/09/03

Actually, Kamon, what we did is known as Operation Base Delta Zero. And it involves reducing a world's surface to molten slag.

That Tholatin could ever again be hospitible I don't really care about, but that any crystals (or even land formations such as mountains) could exist, is a long stretch at best.

#7 2:07am 25/09/03

Well, considering that you claim not to be violating General Rule ten... These crystals on Thoaltin are more then likely found across the galaxy.

My advice, try again. The changes I would be advising would change the project so much as to steal it's identity.

#6 12:52am 25/09/03

Umm, Drayson. I don't remember you ever saying you blew up a mountain. I have no montian complexes except for now. You bombarded the cities and military complex's in them.

Everything ends in an arguement here. Anyway, what would you like me to change? You name it and I'll do it. What additions would you like me to make other than the materials?

#5 9:13pm 24/09/03

I have many problems with thiss R&D, starting with the way it has been written, moving onto the actual legitimacy of the project, and ending with the possibility within TRF.

I am hesitant about the near-perfect phrasing of the device, as previously stated and the lack of drawbacks. I also dislike the fact that this R&D will end in a somantic argument with an opposing faction when TTR gets to apply this tech. If you cannot find what I am talking about, then I suggest that perhaps you should not be working on a cloak tech at this time. Your wording has created for a R&D that sounds like it's trying to come across as perfect for those constant battle situations.

As for the legitmacy of actual application...
Drayson has a point, Tholatin was bombarded in most harsh fashion, which may not have destroyed all of the crystals currently in existance, I do believe it would certianly affect the conditions under which they form.
Now, the creation of this catalyst crystal could infringe upon General rule 10, which I will consult with the staff on. However, I want a heck of a lot more. Name the other 'ores' used to create the cloak, where they are found, etc.

Turning towards TRF legitmacy... Cloaks are supposed to be exceedingly rare, expensive and demanding. I am not one to say you cannot have a true-cloak, but I am saying that you cannot have this one as it appears above.
In all honesty, the requirements for the cloak, are a joke.
The increased build-time likewise.

That's just me.

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#4 4:12pm 24/09/03

Oh, yes. The Holy Demosthesian Empire did bombard Tholatin into the Stone Age, didn't they?

As a note, Kamon, crystals tend to take thousands, even hundreds of thousands, of years to grow naturally. Now, how long has passed since HDE nearly destroyed your planet...?

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#3 3:15pm 24/09/03

Thats a sketchy limb to go out on at best Kamon...

Honestly. The rule entirely applies. Such an arguement isn't likely to make that change either!

#2 1:35pm 24/09/03

No actually iw would be a good idea since you have experience with the cloak. The cloak is not perfect. Things can happen to it that will cause a malfunction. FOr instance if the crystal decays unexpectedly or such. And you can obviously see it by the eye if you're near a ship with it on.

As for creating a planet with a valuable resource, that doesn't apply. Tholatin is a Cannon planet in the Star Wars galaxy and for all we know these crystals, which basically are just crystals that grow on Tholatin, could exist. And Tholatin was terraformed a while back by IDT but the mountains would be unaffected by it. The planet has the ability to produce these crystals. I will work on the time requirements a bit.

#1 5:01am 24/09/03

I'm curious about the geographical composition of Tholatin, and the extent of this crystal? Considering the isolated affect on the planets mountains.

Also under
[center]General Rule #10 - # Planets can not be created that have rare and valuable resources attributed to them. This includes Bacta, Carbonite, etc.[/center]

I wonder about the creation of this new compound. I also think the phrasing of this R&D makes this sound like an absolutely perfect cloak, such as:
[quote]Can only be detected by Sonar and CGT’s[/quote]
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[quote]The ship essentially disappeared from every scope that ORS had on it. Nothing picked it up. The shuttle could have swept in the hangar of a capital ship before it was seen.[/quote]

I'm also concerned that this near-perfect cloak has minimal actual requirements and the increased buildtime seems a bit low.

If requested I will refrain from further comment on this topic due to my own connection with the Mandalorian Cloak (mkII & then mkII)

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