A big thank you to anyone who does.
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Where did I go right?
Can people please let me know what they think of this thread as it moves on. Bad criticism would be most appreciated as I'm trying to build up my role-playing ability abit and could really do with people pointing out mistakes I make.
A big thank you to anyone who does.
A big thank you to anyone who does.
Jedi Master
I'll make sure to read it.
Return of the King of the Cafe!
I quite enjoyed being a part of 'Out with the old, in with the new', so I'll be sure to read this one as well.
Jedi Masterwan ... ... Shaken, Not Stirred
The first post looks quite good to me.
If I had to offer some criticism, I would question your analogy to the "Reaper of Grim." Perhaps this isn't fitting for Star Wars writing?
If I had to offer some criticism, I would question your analogy to the "Reaper of Grim." Perhaps this isn't fitting for Star Wars writing?
Bananas
Where did I go right?
I wasn't to sure of that bit myself Milkshake but I couldn't really think of anything else that would describe the image I had in my head.
in the depths of r'lyeh<br>IQ Rating: 200<br>She's smarterer than everyone!
Bwaa. I'm sorry. I have creativity block.
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// we all get out want me as a fever so low
// positive voice negative pills everyone everything
// a fever a fever now you can see remind me
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// a fever a fever now you can see remind me
Where did I go right?
Meh, nothing to worry about.
// pink killer
Grr.
... my world of melted colours ...
... my world of melted colours ...
Where did I go right?
It's fine.
I put up a reply. Pretty crappy but one but a reply none the less.
I put up a reply. Pretty crappy but one but a reply none the less.