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1 4:58am 04/05/07

Return of the King of the Cafe!

Or, if you preffer, Magnum Opus. 50+ pags in word that I've written over the last month.

http://www.therebelfaction.com/forums/showthread.php?p=150709#post150709

It was insanely fun, I got to play around with a lot of things I don't usually, and I think it all came out pretty good. I couldn't say for sure though, so I invite everyone to go ahead and read it (and hopefully comment on it!). Thank you.

Beff Pike

2 6:32am 04/05/07

Bounty Hunter

I'll reserve myself for having read it.

But now, knowing what I know of it's content and seeing it as a final reality, I must state this; Dolash - you are one with the pantheon.

Beff Pike

3 9:17am 04/05/07

Bounty Hunter

We will speak in private and I will adorn you with my praise.

I find myself without words, having just finished. You are a brilliant star. Thank you for creating this and sharing it with me.

Ithron

4 2:52pm 04/05/07

Sith Knight

Wow.

I can't think what else to say. Seriously, I typed "Wow." and now I'm at a loss - I've started about ten different sentences but that story was so utterly readable, so powerful and so clever that I'm not sure what I could say as a critique. The characters were believable, and written so well... It just worked, in a way that a lot of stories don't.

Whoever you are, read this RP. You have no excuse not to.

I would particularly suggest that any relatively new people who play Force sensitive characters should read it, as something to aspire to. Dolash may be a "lightsider" but he has far more skill in writing Sith characters than most folk, myself included, could ever lay claim to.

Kudos.

EDIT: In fact I think