Kach...
the bulk of the hundred or so Imperial S.S. Ships emerged from hyperspace
With an urgency brought upon them by their desperation, the remainder of the fleet – around 100 ships
Uh, wtf?
And it's in the same paragraph, man.
Reports of this plight came over the comm, broadcast by line-of-sight lasers from the distant fleet.
It's funny; given your post in this thread preceeding your actual IC post, Ahnk and I were discussing how badly you would abuse the two subjects you mentioned in an abusive sort of way - CGT, LOS.
First paragraph in.
Faith.
I have none.
Why?
Because...
Another voice came over the comm, this one General Vos thinking aloud: “Nobody should have shields that good. Nobody! But then again, if they have that much power against turbolasers…”
Second paragraph. SECOND PARAGRAPH!
And you know what makes you a douche? You didn't even establish LOS communications, you just 'moded them in to having somehow already been established.
Established with Wes.
Vos, who is conducting his ships, dealing with the fact that he just jumped out of hyperspace in to a fleet and badly out of position. Wes who happens to be, in your own words, "Hundred of miles away from Wes and his fleet"....
Blatant Godmoding, imho.
You assume Vos has nothing better to do. You assume he is already EXPECTING your LOS communications. You assume that there is nothing between your position and his. You assume he is not moving. You assume NO ONE is moving...
I know they say that, "when you assume you make an ass of you and me."
I disagree.
You're just making an ass of yourself.
Next...
“Look at the CGT readout,” the Lieutenant told him, Lieutenant Mischel.
I want R&D proof that whatever-the-hell ship this is has a CGT. I want proof that this ship has one.
Why?
Because the CGT is, as described as a "rare and expensive type of sensor."
Because I bet Ahnk that you would abuse the hell out of the supposed CGT(s) at your disposal. That you would assume their presence on numerous ships and so on.
Because we figured you would badly over-estimate their functionality.
“I see it, Lieutenant” he said without giving it his full attention, before something caught his eye – the enemy fleet was seated within an ocean of gravitational pulses in what would be normally calm space. Like a sea, the very fabric of space time was covered in flowing waves and ripples emanating in weak but visible pulses out of a number of ships in the center of the formation.
A rare and expensive sensor which Kach has taken the time to learn how to read, apparently. But then I bet he knows every system on every one of his ships inside and out. Knows their names, serial numbers, and who they're dating.
overlaid over one of the CGT readouts.
Support for my abuse bet. Why?
"overlaid over
one of the CGT readouts"
Do you mean that you have multiple "readouts" for a single CGT, or multiple readouts for multiple CGTs?
Over the intercomm came General Vos' voice again, “Gravity, he shouted, probably unconsciously if the tone of voice was any indication.“They’re using gravity as a shield.
OMGWTF!? I was wrong?!
See, I thought it would be in Vos's next post that he would put the pieces together. I guessed that he would at least...
... but no! Kach to the rescue. "I'll just have Wes put it all together in MY POST so that we can start to win teh dya! r0x0rz!"
And then Kach can act on your smart(ass)ness, right Vos?
“Lieutenant, pass word to Commodore Brandt, General Vos, his captains and the Borderland compliment that the enemy vessels are gravitationally shielded by the large ships at the rear center of the formation, approximately 2,800 meters long.
"How shall we pass the word, sir? We are jammed"
Kach, "Use our magical swiveling LOS laser beams. I'm sure they have super computers that can compute trajectories and well... do all the stuff I need to have done to make this make sense... sensors. You know?"
"Uh, yes sir. You mean the GMS?"
"GMS?"
"God-Mode Sensor, sir."
/facepaw.
“Captain, I want you to signal the Dictators and activate one of them. The enemy isn't letting us talk. I don't think that it's fair we let him talk too. He was tempted to ask if they could find a way to get through the fighter band jamming, but jamming was jamming and if it was easy to get through what would be the point? From the reports he'd heard the enemy jamming was one step short of impenetrable, just like that of their own Dictator.
They jammed you. Now you get to jam them back, right? Cool!
But wait...
If they have jammed you, and now you want to jam them back, but the only reason you are able to accomplish that is because of your mighty LOS communications which seem to provide the same functionality of your other communications, what makes you think they don't have the same miracle LOS communications which will render your jamming moot?
More over, how can you even signal your other ships to start jamming unless you can communicate with them in crystal clarity? Oh, right... I forgot about your GMS.
Shadows jutted across the room, projected by the edges of consoles and control panels and explosions and turbolasers flashing outside the room, making the shadows flow eerily like the gravity field she had seen on the ship's CGT display
So, that's at least two CGT's present.
I'm guessing all your Reign's have CGT's right? Good R&D'ing there. A rare and expensive sensor, is the CGT. But then, when you built your ships the Empire held sway over, "thousands" of systems right?
All of a sudden there was an eerie whistle, static and white noise all mixed together that caught her attention – communications were back online but overwhelmed by enemy jamming.
WTF does that even mean?
That's like saying, "My breathing seems to be working again even though I am overwhelmed by being under water."
After a few moments it was entirely gone, leaving what was now clearly the fighter pilot band open and adding to the surrealness of the situation. Noting the return of communications, pilots used the chance to say whatever needed said quickly.
Did I fucking miss something?
Ahnk; did your dudes switch off their jamming?
Kach; do your fighters also have GMS hardlight comms? Cos if they do, I want some. They seem to be able to track, broadcast, recieve... these are some sort of lasers... on fighters, dog-fighting, no less.
“Contact Coruscant.” Kach ordered. “Tell them they need to get their planetary shields operational again, now! I don't care if high command has been killed, they've got to have a back up command set up someplace by now, and do it installation by installation if you have to!”
Beam a laser pigeon at them!
Other then that your post had some good points.
/lie