Yeah, that's cool.
And I'm fine with TNO having _____ number of _____ type of starship as long as you "understand that these ships do take time to deploy, and they do not grow on trees simply on the basis of planets being taken."
What I am saying is that, like any bridge, this goes in two directions. Whatever you feel fit to impose upon Corise is fine as long as you understand that it is entirely within his right to do the same.
And I'd like to speak to your points as noted above; They're great but you utterly fail to account for the downside of those so-called advantages. The good must be taken with the bad.
Speaking to Slave Labor; we have the propensity for immensly under-spec work, certianly not the quality you get out of a highly positivly motivated work force. And that's just one downside of using forced labor.
Speaking to Man Power; welcome to Star Wars. This is, after all, fiction of the scientific sort and if you do the research you'll find that yes, Corise is not just some dumb noob and that he has, in fact, taken the time to adress this in his stories and his R&D submissions. Man Power can be a clear advantage, but again in typical fashion, you're not allowing for the pitfalls of an immense labor force as relates to the actual production of goods.
Speaking to Goverment; a dictatorship often has the ability to act with unilateral authority that is denied a Democracy due to the whole process of representation and so on. Again, however, any dictatorship comes rife with its own flaw which many TNO authors (Drayson inclusive) have taken great time and measure to detail... In this situation I agree that a strong military dictatorship would generally have the ability to force the production of more extensive military assets during peace-time. It's a clear advantage and one that extends to Corise as well, had you taken the time to examine the Kashan system of goverment which is at times as close as you can get to Military-based Democracy.
And again, Drayson, as you seem to have taken up the gauntlet of prosecuting this debacle; I ask you to provide relative proof to sustain your argunment as it pretains to the Kashans and the Coalition, not a generalized approach to why TNO is teh uber badass and Corise can suck a lamb.