Before we get started on the technical aspects, I would just like to say that your writing style is exceptionally good. Anyways…
The Dictator was exceptionally well shielded, and for the moment in little real danger from the enemy assault. Nonetheless, his first order was for that ship to begin to retreat, making for the Imperial Exploratory Fleet stationed nearby.
I realize that the Dictator is making the jump and leaving for hyperspace, but I think it would have some serious damage in certain sections of the ship due to the railguns, and that there would be crew losses from the gravitational field disruptors for future reference when those weapons are used.
From what I have read I do not think that there are no defences on the Dictator that would be very effective against a the weapons being used by the some of the ships. A single railgun, let alone against the 9 heavy railguns currently being used on by the Cavalier-class. Aside from numerous canonical sources, Kas has shown the merits of using high-speed projectile weapons, particularly those that fire slugs: “The projectiles are unharmed by ray shielding, and strike only particle shielding and hull. Although particle shielding is designed to specifically to stop asteroids and other space debris with ease, it is ill equipped for the speed and intent of the Medium Gauss Gun's slug.” While the KDI III-7 is not a Gauss Gun, it is a 70 meter long Railgun, and would have similar performance in terms of how its projectiles interact with shields.
If you would prefer not to look at it from that perspective, recognize the SAC shells are being used. The SAC-style shell starts a small, but superheated plasma fusion process when it hits the ship, which is basically like getting hit by an armor-piercing nuclear fusion warhead; that’s going to leave a little mark. Moreover, the gravitational field disruptors of the Juaire’s are not affected by shields or any armor at all, since it disrupts the Dictator’s own gravitational field.
A single SH-F canon would destroy a moderately sized freigter or severely damage a small capital ship. Packed together, they were devestating, as the enemy's smaller gunships soon found out. Waves of energy washed over the bows of those vessels, engulfing shields and overloading them.
Could I get a comparative rating for a SH-F in terms of heavy turbolasers? I think a single heavy turbolaser could also slag a moderately sized freighter pretty easily, and I would rather not jip you on the amount of damage that would be done to my ships.
Curiously, as the remaining freighters fled through the "no-man's land" between the two fleets, they swung erratically through space. The Commodore had seen vids of the Millenium Falcon fighting its way through the asteroid field near Hoth, and the manouvers were eerily similar.
Yet there was no asteroid field between the two fleets. With nothing to lose, he ordered the fleet to lay down covering fire in the supposedly empty space.
The explosions that began to light up the area as his ships began to fire confirmed his suspicions: stealth ships.
Um…what? In my previous post, the freighters are out of the firing arcs altogether between the two fleets, while the starfighters are admittedly within the no-man’s space. Thus, there would be no maneuvering by the freighters to give the impression that they were dodging something.
"I want to know as soon as we can see them." The Empire's own stealth fighters, of the EMPIRE class, had come forward now, and were soon engaging the nearly invisible enemy fighters. The opposing ships were given away by their lasers, and between their apparent slow speed and the lightning-quick reflexes of the EMPIRE ships, many met their doom.
I object. One does not simply roleplay what another forces would too; especially in a fleeting engagement. As it is, that is exactly what Kashan starfighters never do at the beginning; the starfighters generally go with alpha strikes using their stealthed missiles to first decimate the enemy ranks. After the initial missile attack, then the KDF ships break up and engage for hit-and-runs.
"Right where they don't want to be." And at that moment, the EMPIRE capital ship vanished into hyperspace...
I'm a little confused. Don't you have interdictor mines up right now to block all hyperspace travel in the nearby vicinity?