in the depths of r'lyeh<br>IQ Rating: 200<br>She's smarterer than everyone!
It looks like you "went over" the original drawing with the pen/brush/whatever tool (I'm not familiar with PSP). Did you ? If so, I can give you a few pointers on how to make your lineart smoother and cleaner, if you want.
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// we all get out want me as a fever so low
// positive voice negative pills everyone everything
// a fever a fever now you can see remind me