The idea I always have for Hyfe (until he rp's) is that the darkside of the force is all consuming. And while it may be thought that he regained control after Apparitions, I would say he is sliding back down.
Therefore he's highly suspicious of quite a few people and a general arrogant pain in the ass.
As for Bhindi. I think all TNO leaders keep themselves at a distance in case one falls the others circle like jackals to absorb position and power.
Perhaps in this instance, Bhindi sees an opportunity to displace Kaine and take his spot as Supreme Commander Imperial Armed Forces? Perhaps because she's a woman, Hyfe thinks she's more controllable.
Perhaps some of Kaine's clone soldiers go mad and strike at Imperial Worlds as well (you know that unreliable cloning technology).
I am open to suggestions tho.
Vance: It's 10 years in the future. Keep that in mind if you want in. A plotline can always be created though I do not know your Vance character.
Damalis: You can be visiting relatives on a planet in the Coalition when nasty Trandoshans and Chiss attack. Perhaps dating Jan
? There is always a way.Dolash:
I would think it could also involve the Furen, a race of genetically regressed Azguards exiled hundreds of thousands of years ago who follow the Six Banished Gods, expelled when the Six Gods of Azguard drove them off for trying to lead Azguard to the dark side of the force. They are now a violent military power that has been lurking on the edges of the Azguard sector and plotting for some time.
That's a damn fine idea there. Perhaps the azguard in question (as Messiah) is being controlled or was groomed by Furen. I mean, can you tell an Azguard and Furen apart visually? If not, then the Messiah dude could be Furen. But if so, it would work better if he was Azguard (to be accepted by majority) but controlled or working out a plan by the Furens.
As for key moments, I agree to an extent. what happens to Kaine will pretty much stay but the actual results of the battle and what happens afterward and how it affects peeps is up in the air.
Tactical finesse is fine. But I would also like a degree of good battle description whether blowing up things or being blown up. A ship dead in space may still have fight left in it or something. Weird or desperate measures to win the day. That sort of thing.
Winrar: Do away. If he is going to be darker then cool. Then perhaps Kaine may tap his expertise in the force as Kaine is not force sensitive and usually does not trust them. And I doublt Itar would be part of TNSO thus under Lupercus' watching eye which makes him a prime candidate for Kaine to use in his plots.
Grevious: hmmm.....Perhaps something along the lines of this Vondiranach (one of many clones taken from that genetic material taken by Capt. Merrik during BDE takeover of Tholatin) being answered about the return of Tholatin. Perhaps something along the lines of: go back to hell!
