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Nothingness
I didn't mean they were nice with their critiques just that they were all around nice. They butchered my poor story :dead .
Bounty Hunter
Circe. Burn!
The Slothful Padawan
Advice and tips is called the FAQ.
Nothingness
Nevermind
Into doom we fight, but in glory we die
Blink If You Can Hear Me
Good god Kraken, get a god damned girlfriend.
OS: In a world of bon-bons, you are a twinkie.
Ahnk: God damn you, I am Count Chocula and you know it.
I'm not spending my anniversary night thumping my head against the wall. - Damalis, on Moderating TRF
Then tell him you want it harder, damnit! - Ahnk, on Damalis
Back with a Vengeance
I do. Her name is Kagome.
Oh wait, do you mean an actual girlfriend?
EDIT: Here is her picture. Hands off though!!!
Oh wait, do you mean an actual girlfriend?
EDIT: Here is her picture. Hands off though!!!
Blink If You Can Hear Me
Please die.
OS: In a world of bon-bons, you are a twinkie.
Ahnk: God damn you, I am Count Chocula and you know it.
I'm not spending my anniversary night thumping my head against the wall. - Damalis, on Moderating TRF
Then tell him you want it harder, damnit! - Ahnk, on Damalis
Sith Apprentice
The truth is, most don't have the necessary experience or know-how to effectively critique your "serious" work. Internet sites like the one mentioned above are rarely very helpful because all you are getting are unqualified opinions. That's not to say they are totally useless, of course, but I'd be wary of relying on them.
Sith Knight
Exactly. Of course, the idea of having a writing "tutorial" on TRF isn't necessarily a bad one? For those who didn't do GCSE English (or whatever the US/Canadian/etc equivalent is) it could help in getting the basics of story writing. i.e. beginning, middle, end, dramatic climax, etc.
Especially if it was written by members: Why not make a set of pages on the wiki for it? Then those that want can edit and those that don't have no need to.
Especially if it was written by members: Why not make a set of pages on the wiki for it? Then those that want can edit and those that don't have no need to.
The Slothful Padawan
How about this. If you can't write, DON'T COME TO A FREAKING WRITING BOARD!