1. I disagree with many of the ways that you are describing Corise's arguments. He never did not allow damage to his Juraires, he just did not go along with your whole "the guns are knocked offline or destroyed (i forget which)". And that can not be considered "minor damage". (I'm not trying to reopen that argument, simply say that your initial points all against Corise aren't exactly accurate).
2. TNO complained about much of the damage Corise dished out was well. Need I mention your post which included something along the lines of "fine, i'll write a detailed paragraph on all the damage that I suffered, which would go along the lines of "pretty much nothing." To be fair you'd forgotten some of the ships attacking your ships, but you still said your ships had suffered essentially no damage.
3. Also on the issue of OOC arguments, TNO started what became a 3 page argument on the NUMBER of PSDs Kashan could have. And that thread was largely argued by you, not Kach who was the one who made the thread initially. And nearing the end you stated the only reason why you were arguing it still was in a theoretical context and cause you were stubborn. Meaning that you appear to like OOC arguments just as much as you claim Corise does.
4. If this was really ALL about writing a good, interesting story, then why did you not invest the time to describe HOW TNO found out about the convoy and such? As well, why didn't TNO lay down decent groundwork for the assault on Metalorn, rather than just have TNO members jump in with their own fleets (as I believe Kraken has said he did)? An interesting, good story includes groundwork and such, not just "so we magically knew when your convoy was coming through, intercepted it in an attempt to destroy it and then decided to launch a fleet at your planet." I'm not atempting to call you a liar or anything like that, but if you really did want to have a really good, interesting story, you could have put more effort in at the start laying the groundwork for a good, interesting story, rather than just starting off with a post that is questionable in its feasibility and that lays the groundwork for a purely competitive roleplay.
This post is not intended as a flamebait or the pre-cursor for a flamewar. Rather it is more an objection to the one-sided post by Drayson which appears designed to make Corise look horrible and Drayson wonderful (yes that sentence is a bit of an exaggeration on Drayson's last post, but the point is similar). And no I don't want to get into a long, drawn out argument over how one-sided Drayson's post is or how one-sided mine is (I know its one-sided), just trying to make a post showing that the situation isn't as one-sided as Drayson is painting it as. Neither Drayson, nor Corise are at fault, nor are either of them perfectly innocent. Both have argued points in this thread (as have I). And I hope that this post does not become the excuse for a flamewar.
Now, onto the real issues:
Corise, by that drawing Audacieuse (or whatever) could follow the EMPIRE SOb. So just RP it as such. The Audacieuse stayed firing on the EMPIRE SOb the entire time.
Reasonably Drayson does have a point about the backup shields. Some of his shots would have hit some of the shield projectors. So the backup shields (because of that) wouldn't be AS powerful. The issue over whether backup shields are automatically weaker isn't needed, is kind of a stupid issue to begin with. It all depends on how the person RPs/R&Ds it themselves. In this case I would not say they are automatically weaker.
So yeah, the EMPIRE SOb is behind the Pegasus. Yes the Pegasus's shields aren't as powerful. But at the same point the Audacieuse is, and has been, firing on the EMPIRE SOb the entire time. And the bombers and Cavaliers, as I understand it, could have just shortened their arc to compensate for the new position of the EMPIRE SOb. So they could still fire on it. The Redemption probably requires a bit of time to adjust to the new position of the EMPIRE SOb, but it wouldn't take that long (reasonably it just has to make a 90 degree turn and then travel the length of the Pegasus or so and its there).
EDIT: Well apparently Corise already responded. I'll leave my post as is, but I think this is essentially turning into a flamewar. So I point towards the last part of my post and suggest that the thread continues, and the OOC part dies down. Or we at least get back to the issues, rather than the flamewar bit.