The Rebel Faction

If you havn’t noticed, look above the staff listing in the header. It says “Contest: Write up a 500 word off-the-wall tongue-in-cheek story and post it in the Cafe for judging. Good luck!”

This is a listing of the stories submitted so far. The contest will continue to accept submissions for a week or two, then it will close and judging begin. You may submit as many stories as you wish.

Note: This is not restricted to just Star Wars, it can be about anything




Submissions
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Author: Tacita
Title: Hanging Around
Link: pub33.ezboard.com/fswalli...1373.topic

Author: Shreeftut
Title: The Next Saddam
Link: pub33.ezboard.com/fswalli...1370.topic

Author: Kamon
Title: A Ninja's Tale: Twilight
Link: pub33.ezboard.com/fswalli...1380.topic

Author: Kamon
Title: A Ninja's Tale: Shadowblade
Link: pub33.ezboard.com/fswalli...1379.topic

Author: Kas
Title: The Machine
Link: pub33.ezboard.com/fswalli...1382.topic

And let the judging begin. Anyone can judge. Read a story, and then rate them on a 1-5 scale using the following form:

Originality:
Humor:
Drama:
Enjoyability:

Final Thoughts:

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Please post the ratings here, for ease of totaling (by me)

Hanging Around

Originality : 3
Humor: 4
Drama: 3
Enjoyability: 5

Final Thoughts:

Very nice! I liked the character you put into the characters, as well as the jokes. The toilet thing really hit my funny bone. The only problem is it seems to be part of a bigger story, seemed very incomplete in the sudden way it ended.

Nice.

A Ninja's Tale: Twlight

Originality:4
Humor:1
Drama:3
Enjoyability:3

Final Thoughts:
Good story, it would work well if developed into a longer tale. I think the low word restriction killed much of the drama here.

Not bad, keep it up.

Yes that basically ruined everything and yes originally I had planne don it being quite a bit longer. Not a novel but somewhat of a long tale of the Ninja.